短视频已成为许多人日常生活的一部分，并且应用程序的用户数量激增。
短视频应用主要由年轻人使用，也吸引了许多中老年人，并被用作娱乐，信息和社交互动的重要渠道。伴随着这种现象，人们开始担心短视频成瘾，因为我们在这些应用上花费了太多时间。您对此现象有何看法？
用您自己的标题写一篇文章，清楚地陈述您的观点，并用理由和例子支持您的观点。 您应该写大约400个字。
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要求：用您自己的标题写一篇文章，清楚地陈述您的观点，并用理由和例子支持您的观点
标点符号全英 简单词汇的高级替换 名词单复数
第一段：引出观点+自己的观点
第二段：过去，现状，将来 介绍现状
第三段：具体的举例说明。(还没写）
第四段：我们应该怎么办
The self-control is power
it seems universally acknowledged that micro-videos has played a critical part in an ocean of private individuals's general routine of every day living.And with the rapid advance of mobile terminal and internet,the number of users of such applications has been exploding.Short-videos have deprived numerous time and energy of us in our daily life. It has beome my point that ordinary citizens are supposed to relax themselves moderately through short videos rather than swallow in it.
As a well-known saying says,in the past, the carriage and horse were very slow, the letter was very long, the whole life could only love one person.Nevertheless,(1) due to the mobile-phone, at present , is easily available for everyone.Expecially with the advance of 5G,short-videos has been regarding as a crucial way of managing to obtain entertainment ,messages and social interaction.Even the latest decades ,ordinary citizens whose age like (2) my superiors could not image that (3)information ,latest news , materials ,and knowledge can be spreading immediatly and quickly through the internet(4) and they can obtain easily.Teenagers and youngsters ,the major driving force of the short video application,can get(5) what they want and what they need easily from these applications, which is really beyond dispute.Additionally,middle-aged and senior citizens also(6) are attracted to these appliacations (7).
All in all，in my judgement,it is really hight time that due attention can not have failed to paid to the issue.One hand,the authorities are supposed to spend more time in taking measures to limit the daily usage time of entertainment application . On the other hand,superiors had better lead by example and (8） are sussposed to spend more time in instrucing their kids. During netizens's pockets of time,they can not just to surfing on the net.Awareness that moderate surfing and enjoy a healthy life could be cultivated to make them lead a healthy and favorable life.The more actively people face the issue, the more happily they will lead their life.
2.单词是否正确?
3.多个名词作并列主语？
4.大小写?
5.是否需要进行单词替换.
6.和 additionally重合不？
7.这种地方是用it好还是用 short-videos
8.并列连词的省略是否正确
The self-control is power
it seems universally acknowledged that micro-videos has played a critical part in an ocean of private individuals's general routine of every day living.And with the rapid advance of the mobile terminal and the internet,the number of users of such applications has been exploding.
Short-videos have deprived numerous time and energy of us in our daily life. It has beome my point that ordinary citizens are supposed to relax themselves moderately through short videos rather than swallow in it. As a well-known saying says,in the past, the carriage and horse were very slow, the letter was very long, the whole life could only love one person.Nevertheless,due to the mobile-phone, at present , is easily available for everyone.Expecially with the advance of 5G,short-videos has been regarding as a crucial way of managing to obtain entertaimment,messages and social interaction.Even the latest decades ,ordinary citizens whose age like my superiors could not image that information,latest news,materials and knowledge can be spreading immediatly and quickly through the internet and they can obtain easily.Teenagers and youngsters,the major driving force of the short-videos applications,can get what they want and what they need easily, which is really beyond dispute.Additionally,middle-aged and senior citizens also are attracted to these appliacations .
All in all,in my judgement,it is really high time that due attention can not have failed to paid to the issue.One hand,the authorities are supposed to spend more time in taking measures to limit the daily usage time of entertainment application.On the other hand,superiors had better lead by example and are sussposed to spend more time in instrucing their kids. During netizens's pockets of time,they can not just to surfing on the net.Awareness that moderate surfing and enjoy a healthy life could be cultivated to make them lead a healthy and favorable life.The more actively people face the issue,the more happily they will lead their life.
